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RE: OC Alveo v2

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Name: Alveo Mitchell

Nickname: Al

Age: 19

Birth date: December 12, 1999

Eye color symbolism in Fantasy: Green (Resourceful, intelligence)

Original eye color in Reality: Dark blue

Ornament color symbolism: Blue green/Aquamarine – the designs on his shirt during battle (Reserved, control)

Weapon: None

Power/s: summoning as many as 20 holographic screens to gain access to other devices and hack through locked doors/gates; also used to summon offense magic, can fight without weapons, can create translucent physical plates as walls, floating stairs, etc.

Hobbies: playing chess, using and modifying gadgets (computers, laptops, etc.), solving puzzles, playing video games

Likes: gadgets, his laptop, technological science, mathematical problems, astronomy

Dislikes: grass and soil, outdated devices

Strengths: smart and logical in thinking, fast in solving puzzles, witty, good at tinkering objects

Weaknesses: easily tempered, blunt, overly-focused into something, fighting earth-based monsters/enemies

Fears: loss/fall of technology, losing of a loved one, losing in a fight/bet

Ambitions: to become a successful inventor to his father

Personality:
He’s a logical young man who can handle, modify, and even upgrade almost any gadget he comes across to. Though he is usually blunt and straightforward in most situations, he can be caring and understanding to anyone he thinks is very close to him.

Character Background:
He’s the son of a man who owns a highly-famous electronics company, and the grandson to an elderly woman who inherits an endangered fertile farmhouse in Italy. Alveo had a liking to gadgetry and technology ever since his father managed to grow his once small appliance store into the world’s leading electronics company that ever built. He still lives with his grandmother, as a request from his parents, to take care of their farmhouse. But he isn’t entirely fond with nature and doesn’t want to take care, or rather inherit the family farmhouse—not yet at least.

History background:
His grandfather, who also manages the family farmhouse along with his wife and grandson, died due to a sudden heat stroke while plowing the fields in the summer of 2006. Little Alveo and his grandmother tried to reach the old man to the nearest hospitable possible, with no one to get help from since his parents were out of town. Unfortunately, the doctors considered him “dead on arrival”. His only memento from his grandfather was an old book written by an English author entitled “Romeo and Juliet”.

Role in the story:
He serves as the “Green Light” and is the smartest among the “Seven siblings”. Though he has no motive in opening “Eden’s Corridor” at first glance, he later begins to join planning with the group in hopes of finding answers.
Image size
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

heya! First time to critique your work by me ! XD
As your tutor - friend , I also observe your works so, don;t take it seriously okay ? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>


The using of the color is very refreshing to the eye , the usage of the color are really compatible with each other , and blending of shadings are also good though there's something missing and I know what it is. but I'm very happy that you did a Great Job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

Of course this is your OC that's why it has originality, the style and anatomy is good, though the left foot is a really off? better work on those feet dear, and also the left shoulder is a bit off too compared to the right , try to minimize the cantos and lastly the lower arm of the right is a bit too short , though I know you, and I know your capability. You can improve more than I can . <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

The technique is really good, though I can't do that either LOLz ! XD but I really have to say , YOUR IMPROVEMENT HAS A GREAT GAP BETWEEN YOUR FIRST DRAWING THAT YOU GAVE ME UP UNTIL NOW , and I'm very grateful that you did a great job in improving on what you do best ! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

The impact is very good, it's simple but it has that feeling that people want to stare at it more the think that , "how can she do that. . " something like that , that's why GJ ~ <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>


sorry if it's long but hope this helps .
remember , just a little more push of effort will do the job , And I'll be waiting for you "THERE" . <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>